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for :iconezeger: and :iconimprovement-club:

I like the skin colour and its contrast with the cool background and the eyes make me think of Lilo and Stitch. :)

there's a lot to talk about when it comes anatomy.
the human body, while not 100% symmetrical, is still following a rough symmetry and if you mess with that too much the human looks really weird.
So you've got to look out for the eyes and an the shoulders being roughly the same size and (please ignore the different-sized boobs in my version please, I cant' draw boobs symmetrical to save my life).
Another thing you should look out for, is that the backside of the skull is pretty round and if it's missing and/or too flat, it looks like the character had an head injury, which is not a good thing if you don't do it by choice.
Nose and ears are too long in my opinion and when you make the neck a bit slimmer, it looks more feminine in my opinion.
make also sure all features follow the roundness of the face and are in the right relation to each other. if mouth, nose and eyes tilt at different angles, it will looks weird.
Also: think of your light source.
if the nose can cast a shadow, so should the eyes, eybrows, lips, cheekbones and most important the head/chin. If the lightsource is inconsistent it makes the picture look flat.

I hope it helps, keep up the good work!
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Im panicking about the lopsided facial features now, heh. Do you have any tips on keeping the face longer? I want her facial shape to be less round, but I wasnt sure how to go about that.